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The class was having a talent show. And but Stage didn't know what to do! So the another day when he went to school, his teacher Mrs. Green, said that all of us have to do something and but he don't know what to do! So by the end of the day, he went to ask his mom what he could do for his talent show. And his mother said that he could play piano lessons and so a piano teacher tought him piano and he practice and practice until the talent show started. And so he piano with his toes! And by the way, he played "Chopsticks". At last, he did it everyone claped there hands. The End!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2 comments:
I read this story, and found something as below for your
reference. You may ask your Mom before you correct them.
May be wrong / What I think
And but / But
athore / another
he don't know / he doesn't know
for his taient show / for his talent show
a piano teacher tought him / a piano teacher taught him
pratice and pratice / praticed and praticed
piano with his toes / ??toes
thee hands / the hands
I checked my writing in the "Preview" before publishing
my "Comment".Sometimes I checked the words with my
dictionary. You could do the same way,Michelle. OK?
Albert Tao / Your Grandpa / December 20,2004
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