Sunset of The Sabertooth 5#
onec, there was a gril named Anna and a boy named Jake. There is a speaial tree house if, you went in there and said ,"I wish I were in my friend's house it will come ture! Anna went in the tree house with Jake. They saw a book and there was snow so Anna said,"snow" oop" we are in the age ice it's very c- cold they went to a pit but they saw a bear so anna and Jake went out.
They walked and walked the snow was deep so they fall draw. Because there was a tight. Then, some one that lived in here take Anna and Jake back inthe tree house . Finally,they went home.
The End
5 comments:
Because I delivered a speech about the " Engineering "
in a univercity last week,that's why I have delayed to
response your articles.
The last two articles is a continous story,the readers
are waiting for the "end" you shall make.
This article talked about "tree house" and "snow",and
it is interesting. We learned the lesson as " a safe
traveling " from it. In the story, you mentioned "bad
weather", "a terrible bear",and "snowing road",etc.
You are always a good girl in your grandpa's mind.Bye
now.(Albert Tao / September 17, 2004)
Dear grandma and grandpa,
I love you. I am going to write one story every week.
happy brithday to gramdma! I miss you. I hope you have a nice week. thanks again for writing note to me.
Love xoxoxo,
Michelle Tao
dear grandpa amd grandma,
I love you. I'm writing about chess. I know you think that I didn't finsh the other story but I am thinking
of chess so I'M going to write about chess.
dear grandpa amd grandma,
I love you. I'm writing about chess. I know you think that I didn't finsh the other story but I am thinking
of chess so I'M going to write about chess.
9-29-2004
dear grandpa amd grandma,
I love you. I'm writing about chess. I know you think that I didn't finsh the other story but I am thinking
of chess so I'M going to write about chess.
9-29-2004
michelle tao
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