Writing a story

Dear readers,
Do you sometimes wonder how to write stories? Well, if you do I can tell some things you will need to know when you are writing a story. When you are writing a story, you don't just write them down! You have to check you spelling, see if the things you are writing makes sense, and make it interning! You also need to write the story in order.
1. introdution
2. first
3. second
4. Third
5. last or finally

If you carefully write them in order, have you spelling correct, and you story makes sense, you made a story! Sometimes people think it is very hard to write a story, but if they follow these steps, it will make it very easy to write a story. Did these steps help you write a good story?

From the author Michelle Tao

When I go back to Taiwan... When I stay in America...

When I go back to Taiwan, I will like the loudness of people talking, the chinese food there, and my relatives. Well , there is only one thing I don't like... the schools. Well, I'm not trying to say that the schools are bad there, what I am saying is that I don't like the lunches they give us. I mean, in the U.S, you get to choose what you want to eat, but in the some schools in Taiwan you eat what they give you. The lunches both in U.S and Taiwan are good, it's just why in U.S you can choose what to eat, and in Taiwan, you eat what they give you? I don't understand.
I like America because, I can be with my friends, go to a school where you can choose you lunch, and learn English. But there is one I won't be able to there, see my relatives.
The point is, I have to go back to Taiwan because it is my home country, but I will miss America. What should I do? I know! When I go back to Taiwan, I could visit America sometime. Does it seen like a good idea to you?

My trip to Germany ( Chapter 2)

On June 15, 2006, I was in Nurnberg, Germany getting ready to go a city in Germany, Munich. To get there, my dad and I rode the train. Inside the train station, it was big. It was probably 1/5 the size of an airport. The train took about 1-3 hours to get to Munich. It was kinda easy to find where to get on because the instructions how to get on the train was very clear. When we were in Munich, it was quick to find our hotel because the train station ( in Munich) ,was very close to our hotel. The next day, we went to Salzburg, Austria ( Mozart's birthplace) for a tour. As the same, we got there by train. WOW! The view was so good! You could see mountains with snow on the top, cows eating grass, and the beautiful place , Germany. When we were there, and finished with the tour, the tour guy, said" Now, you can ahop around here and look around here, and we'll met here in 2 hours." ( there was other people on this tour, that why there were "we" in the sentence) For those 2 hours my dad and I went to Mozart's birthplace and some other stores like " The egg store"( The store that sells only painted, and sewed eggs) . In Mozart's birthplace building, it shows where Mozart was born, pictures of his family, and the actual plano Mozart played in when he was little. After the two hours was over, we rode the train back to Munich, went back to our hotel, and went to sleep. When I grow up, I want to go to Salzburg again.

This story will me countined next week.